diff --git a/report.lyx b/report.lyx
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--- a/report.lyx
+++ b/report.lyx
@@ -7326,15 +7326,15 @@ name "cha:Problems-of-implementation"
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-This chapter contains specific problems encountered when implementing the
- GGS prototype.
+This chapter contains descriptions of specific problems encountered when
+ implementing the GGS prototype.
  Some of the problems described have solutions attached, however some problems
  were not solved, therefore only ideas for solutions have been attached.
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 The integration of JavaScript as a GDL in the GGS prototype was particularly
- difficult, and is handled in this section and so is the protocol design.
+ difficult, and is handled in this section, so is the protocol design.
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@@ -7376,6 +7376,8 @@ V8
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 For the Mozilla machines, there exists a Erlang binding called erlang_js,
  and for the V8 machine a binding called erlv8 exists.
+ Below follows a discussion about the different bindings and machines, and
+ a motivation as to why erlv8 was preferred over erlang_js.
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@@ -7383,9 +7385,9 @@ erlang_js
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-erlang_js provides direct communication with the JavaScript VM.
- Which is exactly what is desired, however also required is the possibility
- to communicate from JavaScript to Erlang.
+erlang_js provides direct communication with the JavaScript VM, which is
+ exactly what is desired, however also required is the possibility to communicat
+e from JavaScript to Erlang.
  The ability to communicate from JavaScript to Erlang is not yet implemented
  in erlang_js, due to lack of time of the erlang_js developers.
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@@ -7409,8 +7411,8 @@ erlv8
 
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 erlv8 is powered by the V8 engine developed by Google.
- The ability to communicate from JavaScript to Erlang using callbacks (aka
- NIF) is available in the erlv8 bindings and can be used within the GGS.
+ The ability to communicate from JavaScript to Erlang using NIF callbacks
+ is available in the erlv8 bindings and can be used within the GGS.
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@@ -7488,9 +7490,10 @@ key "Slee2007"
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-The use of Thrift, Google protocol buffers - which is a different approach
- to that implemented by Google - or other protocols can be supported quite
- easily by developing protocol modules for each the protocols.
+The use of Google protocol buffers - which is a different approach to a
+ standard protocol framework, implemented by Google - or other protocols
+ can be supported quite easily by developing protocol modules for each the
+ protocols.
  No protocol modules for these protocols have however been developed during
  the writing of this thesis.
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