diff --git a/1-js/05-data-types/04-array/10-maximal-subarray/solution.md b/1-js/05-data-types/04-array/10-maximal-subarray/solution.md
index dfc6e2eb..a2ba50bf 100644
--- a/1-js/05-data-types/04-array/10-maximal-subarray/solution.md
+++ b/1-js/05-data-types/04-array/10-maximal-subarray/solution.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# The slow solution 
+# The slow solution
 
-We can calculate all possible subsums. 
+We can calculate all possible subsums.
 
 The simplest way is to take every element and calculate sums of all subarrays starting from it.
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ The solution has a time complexety of [O(n<sup>2</sup>)](https://en.wikipedia.or
 
 For big arrays (1000, 10000 or more items) such algorithms can lead to a seroius sluggishness.
 
-# Fast solution 
+# Fast solution
 
 Let's walk the array and keep the current partial sum of elements in the variable `s`. If `s` becomes negative at some point, then assign `s=0`. The maximum of all such `s` will be the answer.
 
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ function getMaxSubSum(arr) {
   let maxSum = 0;
   let partialSum = 0;
 
-  for (let item of arr; i++) { // for each item of arr
+  for (let item of arr) { // for each item of arr
     partialSum += item; // add it to partialSum
     maxSum = Math.max(maxSum, partialSum); // remember the maximum
     if (partialSum < 0) partialSum = 0; // zero if negative
@@ -91,5 +91,4 @@ alert( getMaxSubSum([-1, -2, -3]) ); // 0
 
 The algorithm requires exactly 1 array pass, so the time complexity is O(n).
 
-You can find more detail information about the algorithm here: [Maximum subarray problem](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maximum_subarray_problem). If it's still not obvious why that works, then please trace the algorithm on the examples above, see how it works, that's better than any words. 
-
+You can find more detail information about the algorithm here: [Maximum subarray problem](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maximum_subarray_problem). If it's still not obvious why that works, then please trace the algorithm on the examples above, see how it works, that's better than any words.
diff --git a/1-js/05-data-types/05-array-methods/article.md b/1-js/05-data-types/05-array-methods/article.md
index 522e7ec4..276d8871 100644
--- a/1-js/05-data-types/05-array-methods/article.md
+++ b/1-js/05-data-types/05-array-methods/article.md
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ let arr = [1, 2, 3, 4, 5]
 
 let result = arr.reduce((sum, current) => sum + current), 0);
 
-alert( result ); // 15
+alert(result); // 15
 ```
 
 Here we used the most common variant of `reduce` which uses only 2 arguments.
@@ -562,12 +562,24 @@ The result is the same. That's because if there's no initial, then `reduce` take
 
 The calculation table is the same as above, minus the first row.
 
-But such use requires an extreme care. If the array is empty, then `reduce` call without initial value gives an error. So it's generally advised to specify the initial value.
+But such use requires an extreme care. If the array is empty, then `reduce` call without initial value gives an error.
+
+Here's an example:
+
+```js run
+let arr = [];
+
+// Error: Reduce of empty array with no initial value
+// if the initial value existed, reduce would return it for the empty arr.
+arr.reduce((sum, current) => sum + current);
+```
+
+
+So it's advised to always specify the initial value.
 
 The method [arr.reduceRight](mdn:js/Array/reduceRight) does the same, but goes from right to left.
 
 
-
 ## Iterate: forEach
 
 The [arr.forEach](mdn:js/Array/forEach) method allows to run a function for every element of the array.
@@ -615,13 +627,13 @@ alert(Array.isArray({})); // false
 alert(Array.isArray([])); // true
 ```
 
-## Methods: "thisArg"
+## Most methods support "thisArg"
 
 Almost all array methods that call functions -- like `find`, `filter`, `map`, with a notable exception of `sort`, accept an optional additional parameter `thisArg`.
 
-In the sections above that parameter is not explained, because it's rarely used.
+That parameter is not explained in the sections above, because it's rarely used. But for completeness we have to cover it.
 
-But for completeness here's the full syntax:
+Here's the full syntax of these methods:
 
 ```js
 arr.find(func, thisArg);
@@ -633,7 +645,7 @@ arr.map(func, thisArg);
 
 The value of `thisArg` parameter becomes `this` for `func`.
 
-For instance, here we use an object method as a filter:
+For instance, here we use an object method as a filter and `thisArg` comes in handy:
 
 ```js run
 let user = {
diff --git a/1-js/08-error-handling/2-custom-errors/article.md b/1-js/08-error-handling/2-custom-errors/article.md
index 709cd359..d7a780f6 100644
--- a/1-js/08-error-handling/2-custom-errors/article.md
+++ b/1-js/08-error-handling/2-custom-errors/article.md
@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
 
 When we develop something, we often need our own error classes to reflect specific things that may go wrong in our tasks. For errors in network operations we may need `HttpError`, for database operations `DbError`, for searching operations `NotFoundError` and so on.
 
-Our errors should inherit from basic `Error` class and support basic error properties like `message`, `name` and, preferably, `stack`. But they also may have other properties of their own, e.g. `HttpError` objects may have `statusCode` property with a value like `404` or `403` or `500`.
+Our errors should support basic error properties like `message`, `name` and, preferably, `stack`. But they also may have other properties of their own, e.g. `HttpError` objects may have `statusCode` property with a value like `404` or `403` or `500`.
 
-Technically, we can use standalone classes for our errors, because JavaScript allows to use `throw` with any argument. But if we inherit from `Error`, then it becomes possible to use `obj instanceof Error` check to identify error objects. So it's better to inherit from it.
+JavaScript allows to use `throw` with any argument, so technically our custom error classes don't need to inherit from `Error`. But if we inherit, then it becomes possible to use `obj instanceof Error` to identify error objects. So it's better to inherit from it.
 
-As we build our application, our own errors naturally form a hierarchy, for instance `HttpTimeoutError` may inherit from `HttpError`. Examples will follow soon.
+As we build our application, our own errors naturally form a hierarchy, for instance `HttpTimeoutError` may inherit from `HttpError`, and so on.
 
 ## Extending Error
 
@@ -17,14 +17,20 @@ Here's an example of how a valid `json` may look:
 let json = `{ "name": "John", "age": 30 }`;
 ```
 
-If `JSON.parse` receives malformed `json`, then it throws `SyntaxError`. But even if `json` is syntactically correct, it may don't have the necessary data. For instance, if may not have `name` and `age` properties that are essential for our users.
+Internally, we'll use `JSON.parse`. If it receives malformed `json`, then it throws `SyntaxError`.
 
-That's called "data validation" -- we need to ensure that the data has all the necessary fields. And if the validation fails, then it not really a `SyntaxError`, because the data is syntactically correct. Let's create `ValidationError` -- the error object of our own with additional information about the offending field.
+But even if `json` is syntactically correct, that doesn't mean that it's a valid user, right? It may miss the necessary data. For instance, if may not have `name` and `age` properties that are essential for our users.
 
-Our `ValidationError` should inherit from the built-in `Error` class. To better understand what we're extending -- here's the approximate code for built-in [Error class](https://tc39.github.io/ecma262/#sec-error-message):
+Our function `readUser(json)` will not only read JSON, but check ("validate") the data. If there are no required fields, or the format is wrong, then that's an error. And that's not a `SyntaxError`, because the data is syntactically correct, but another kind of error. We'll call it `ValidationError` and create a class for it. An error of that kind should also carry the information about the offending field.
+
+Our `ValidationError` class should inherit from the built-in `Error` class.
+
+That class is built-in, but we should have its approximate code before our eyes, to understand what we're extending.
+
+So here you are:
 
 ```js
-// "pseudocode" for the built-in Error class defined by JavaScript itself
+// The "pseudocode" for the built-in Error class defined by JavaScript itself
 class Error {
   constructor(message) {
     this.message = message;
@@ -34,7 +40,7 @@ class Error {
 }
 ```
 
-Now let's inherit from it:
+Now let's go on and inherit `ValidationError` from it:
 
 ```js run untrusted
 *!*
@@ -59,10 +65,10 @@ try {
 }
 ```
 
-Please note:
+Please take a look at the constructor:
 
-1. In the line `(1)` we call the parent constructor to set the message. JavaScript requires us to call `super` in the child constructor.
-2. The parent constructor sets the `name` property to `"Error"`, so here we reset it to the right value.
+1. In the line `(1)` we call the parent constructor. JavaScript requires us to call `super` in the child constructor, so that's obligatory. The parent constructor sets the `message` property.
+2. The parent constructor also sets the `name` property to `"Error"`, so in the line `(2)` we reset it to the right value.
 
 Let's try to use it in `readUser(json)`:
 
@@ -97,23 +103,34 @@ try {
 *!*
     alert("Invalid data: " + err.message); // Invalid data: No field: name
 */!*
-  } else if (err instanceof SyntaxError) {
+  } else if (err instanceof SyntaxError) { // (*)
     alert("JSON Syntax Error: " + err.message);
   } else {
-    throw err; // unknown error, rethrow it
+    throw err; // unknown error, rethrow it (**)
   }
 }
 ```
 
-Everything works -- both our `ValidationError` and the built-in `SyntaxError` from `JSON.parse` can be generated and handled.
+The `try..catch` block in the code above handles both our `ValidationError` and the built-in `SyntaxError` from `JSON.parse`.
 
-Please take a look at how the code checks for the error type in `catch (err) { ... }`. We could use `if (err.name == "ValidationError")`, but `if (err instanceof ValidationError)` is much better, because in the future we are going to extend `ValidationError`, make new subtypes of it, namely `PropertyRequiredError`. And `instanceof` check will continue to work. So that's future-proof.
+Please take a look at how we use `instanceof` to check for the specific error type in the line `(*)`.
 
-Also it's important that if `catch` meets an unknown error, then it rethrows it. The `catch`  only knows how to handle validation and syntax errors, other kinds (due to a typo in the code or such) should fall through.
+We could also look at `err.name`, like this:
+
+```js
+// ...
+// instead of (err instanceof SyntaxError)
+} else if (err.name == "SyntaxError") { // (*)
+// ...
+```  
+
+The `instanceof` version is much better, because in the future we are going to extend `ValidationError`, make subtypes of it, like `PropertyRequiredError`. And `instanceof` check will continue to work for new inheriting classes. So that's future-proof.
+
+Also it's important that if `catch` meets an unknown error, then it rethrows it in the line `(**)`. The `catch`  only knows how to handle validation and syntax errors, other kinds (due to a typo in the code or such) should fall through.
 
 ## Further inheritance
 
-The `ValidationError` class is very generic. Many things may be wrong. The property may be absent or it may be in a wrong format (like a string value for `age`). Let's make a more concrete class `PropertyRequiredError`, exactly for absent properties. It will carry additional information about the property that's missing.
+The `ValidationError` class is very generic. Many things may go wrong. The property may be absent or it may be in a wrong format (like a string value for `age`). Let's make a more concrete class `PropertyRequiredError`, exactly for absent properties. It will carry additional information about the property that's missing.
 
 ```js run
 class ValidationError extends Error {
@@ -168,9 +185,11 @@ try {
 
 The new class `PropertyRequiredError` is easy to use: we only need to pass the property name: `new PropertyRequiredError(property)`. The human-readable `message` is generated by the constructor.
 
-Plese note that `this.name` in `PropertyRequiredError` once again assigned manually. We could make our own "basic error" class, name it `MyError` that removes this burden from our shoulders by using `this.constructor.name` for `this.name` in the constructor. And then inherit from it.
+Please note that `this.name` in `PropertyRequiredError` constructor is again assigned manually. That may become a bit tedius -- to assign `this.name = <class name>` when creating each custom error. But there's a way out. We can make our own "basic error" class that removes this burden from our shoulders by using `this.constructor.name` for `this.name` in the constructor. And then inherit from it.
 
-Here we go:
+Let's call it `MyError`.
+
+Here's the code with `MyError` and other custom error classes, simplified:
 
 ```js run
 class MyError extends Error {
@@ -195,17 +214,19 @@ class PropertyRequiredError extends ValidationError {
 alert( new PropertyRequiredError("field").name ); // PropertyRequiredError
 ```
 
-Now the inheritance became simpler, as we got rid of the `"this.name = ..."` line in the constructor.
+Now custom errors are much shorter, especially `ValidationError`, as we got rid of the `"this.name = ..."` line in the constructor.
 
 ## Wrapping exceptions
 
-The purpose of the function `readUser` in the code above is "to read the user data", right? There may occur different kinds of errors in the process. Right now we have `SyntaxError` and `ValidationError`, but there may appear more if we put more stuff into it.
+The purpose of the function `readUser` in the code above is "to read the user data", right? There may occur different kinds of errors in the process. Right now we have `SyntaxError` and `ValidationError`, but in the future `readUser` function may grow: the new code will probably generate other kinds of errors.
 
-Right now the code which calls `readUser` uses multiple `if` in `catch` to check for different error types. The important questions is: do we really want to check for all error types one-by-one every time we call `readUser`?
+The code which calls `readUser` should handle these errors. Right now it uses multiple `if` in the `catch` block to check for different error types and rethrow the unknown ones. But if `readUser` function generates several kinds of errors -- then we should ask ourselves: do we really want to check for all error types one-by-one in every code that calls `readUser`?
 
-Often the answer is: "No". The outer code wants to be "one level above all that". It wants to have some kind of "data reading error". Why exactly it happened -- is usually irrelevant (the message has the info). Or, even better if there is a way to get more details, but only if we need to.
+Often the answer is "No": the outer code wants to be "one level above all that". It wants to have some kind of "data reading error". Why exactly it happened -- is often irrelevant (the error message describes it). Or, even better if there is a way to get error details, but only if we need to.
 
-So let's make a new class `ReadError` to represent such errors. If an error occurs inside `readUser`, we'll catch it there and generate `ReadError`. We'll also keep the reference to the original error in the `cause` property.
+So let's make a new class `ReadError` to represent such errors. If an error occurs inside `readUser`, we'll catch it there and generate `ReadError`. We'll also keep the reference to the original error in the `cause` property. Then the outer code will only have to check for `ReadError`.
+
+Here's the code that defines `ReadError` and demonstrates its use in `readUser` and `try..catch`:
 
 ```js run
 class ReadError extends Error {
@@ -273,7 +294,9 @@ try {
 }
 ```
 
-In the code above, `readUser` does exactly as described -- catches syntax and validation errors and throws `ReadError` errors instead (unknown errors are rethrown as usual).
+In the code above, `readUser` works exactly as described -- catches syntax and validation errors and throws `ReadError` errors instead (unknown errors are rethrown as usual).
+
+So the outer code checks `instanceof ReadError` and that's it. No need to list possible all error types.
 
 The approach is called "wrapping exceptions", because we take "low level exceptions" and "wrap" them into `ReadError` that is more abstract and more convenient to use for the calling code. It is widely used in object-oriented programming.
 
diff --git a/6-async/05-async-await/01-rewrite-async-2/task.md b/6-async/05-async-await/01-rewrite-async-2/task.md
index 8b15386c..94af2e57 100644
--- a/6-async/05-async-await/01-rewrite-async-2/task.md
+++ b/6-async/05-async-await/01-rewrite-async-2/task.md
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 
 # Rewrite "rethrow" async/await
 
-Rewrite the "rethrow" example from the chapter <info:promise-chaining> using `async/await` instead of `.then/catch`.
+Below you can find the "rethrow" example from the chapter <info:promise-chaining>. Rewrite it using `async/await` instead of `.then/catch`.
 
-And get rid of recursion in favour of a loop in `demoGithubUser`: with `async/await` that becomes possible and is easier to develop later on.
+And get rid of the recursion in favour of a loop in `demoGithubUser`: with `async/await` that becomes easy to do.
 
 ```js run
 class HttpError extends Error {
diff --git a/6-async/05-async-await/article.md b/6-async/05-async-await/article.md
index 2bdbb148..aef4a073 100644
--- a/6-async/05-async-await/article.md
+++ b/6-async/05-async-await/article.md
@@ -119,9 +119,10 @@ async function showAvatar() {
 showAvatar();
 ```
 
-Pretty clean and easy to read, right?
+Pretty clean and easy to read, right? Much better than before.
 
-Please note that we can't write `await` in the top-level code. That wouldn't work:
+````smart header="`await` won't work in the top-level code"
+People who are just starting to use `await` tend to forget that, but we can't write `await` in the top-level code. That wouldn't work:
 
 ```js run
 // syntax error in top-level code
@@ -129,8 +130,8 @@ let response = await fetch('/article/promise-chaining/user.json');
 let user = await response.json();
 ```
 
-So we need to have a wrapping async function for the code that awaits.
-
+So we need to have a wrapping async function for the code that awaits. Just as in the example above.
+````
 ````smart header="`await` accepts thenables"
 Like `promise.then`, `await` allows to use thenable objects (those with a callable `then` method). Again, the idea is that a 3rd-party object may be not a promise, but promise-compatible: if it supports `.then`, that's enough to use with `await`.
 
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