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 Imagine that you're a top singer, and fans ask day and night for your upcoming single.
 
-To get some relief, you promise to send it to them when it's published. You give your fans a list. They can fill in their email addresses, so that when the song becomes available, all subscribed parties instantly receive it. And even if something goes very wrong, say, fire in the studio, so that you can't publish the song, they will still be notified.
+To get some relief, you promise to send it to them when it's published. You give your fans a list. They can fill in their email addresses, so that when the song becomes available, all subscribed parties instantly receive it. And even if something goes very wrong, say, a fire in the studio, so that you can't publish the song, they will still be notified.
 
-Everyone is happy, because the people don't crowd you anymore, and fans, because they won't miss the single.
+Everyone is happy: you, because the people don't crowd you anymore, and fans, because they won't miss the single.
 
 This is a real-life analogy for things we often have in programming:
 
-1. A "producing code" that does something and takes time. For instance, the code loads data over a network. That's a "singer".
+1. A "producing code" that does something and takes time. For instance, a code that loads the data over a network. That's a "singer".
 2. A "consuming code" that wants the result of the "producing code" once it's ready. Many functions  may need that result. These are the "fans".
 3. A *promise* is a special JavaScript object that links the "producing code" and the "consuming code" together. In terms of our analogy: this is the "subscription list". The "producing code" takes whatever time it needs to produce the promised result, and the "promise" makes that result available to all of the subscribed code when it's ready.