diff --git a/content/blog/introducing-tent.md b/content/blog/introducing-tent.md
index 7287c7d..e7a38b1 100644
--- a/content/blog/introducing-tent.md
+++ b/content/blog/introducing-tent.md
@@ -52,12 +52,12 @@ provider, niche needs should quickly be met, based on demand.
 
 There are many spectrums of need:
 
-technically experienced - inexperienced<br>
-rich - poor<br>
-ad tolerant - ad intolerant<br>
-verified - pseudonyms<br>
-public - private<br>
-centralized - distributed<br>
+| technically experienced | inexperienced |
+| rich | poor |
+| ad tolerant | ad intolerant|
+| verified | pseudonyms |
+| public | private |
+| centralized | distributed |
 
 ## Next steps
 
diff --git a/content/blog/the-tent-manifesto.md b/content/blog/the-tent-manifesto.md
index 275c655..bf541b6 100644
--- a/content/blog/the-tent-manifesto.md
+++ b/content/blog/the-tent-manifesto.md
@@ -31,8 +31,7 @@ of user accounts hosted.
 
 ### Every user has the right to communicate with any other user, regardless of their service provider.
 
-No service provider shall interfere with the communications of any group or paid
-of users, or exclude any users on the basis of their service provider.
+No service provider shall interfere with the communications of any group or pair of users, or exclude any users on the basis of their service provider.
 
 
 ### Every user has the right to take their data and relationships with them.
@@ -51,7 +50,7 @@ communications and must not be restricted.
 ### Different users have different needs.
 
 No single company, product, or platform can solve them all equally. The only
-ecosystems required to serve these needs are protocol-based and decentralized.
+ecosystems capable of serving these needs are protocol-based and decentralized.
 No user's needs need be served poorly for others' needs to be served.