minor changes to the language

report.lyx

@@ -7289,7 +7289,9 @@ This chapter contains descriptions of specific problems encountered when
 
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 The integration of JavaScript as a GDL in the GGS prototype was particularly
- difficult, and is handled in this section, so is the protocol design.
+ difficult, and is handled in this section, so is the protocol design and
+ limitation in the operating systems which have been used during the development
+ and tests.
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@@ -7319,7 +7321,7 @@ and
 \emph on
 IonMonkey
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-, and also there is Googles 
+, and also there is Google's 
 \emph on
 V8
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@@ -7367,14 +7369,15 @@ erlv8
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 erlv8 is powered by the V8 engine developed by Google.
  The ability to communicate from JavaScript to Erlang using NIF callbacks
- is available in the erlv8 bindings and can be used within the GGS.
+ is is present in the erlv8 bindings and can be used within the GGS.
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 Initial releases of the erlv8 bindings had stability issues, these however
  were resolved by the erlv8 developers during the development GGS.
- At this point erlv8 is the JavaScript engine powering JavaScript as a GDL
+ While still described to be in 'alpha' stage, the erlv8 bindings have proved
- in the GGS.
+ to be stable nough and at this point erlv8 is the JavaScript engine powering
+ JavaScript as a GDL in the GGS.
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@@ -7409,7 +7412,8 @@ Protocol design
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-Initially the GGS protocol was planed to use the UDP protocol for transport.
+Initially the GGS protocol was planed to use the UDP protocol as a transport
+ layer.
  Due to the lack of error checking in the UDP protocol, the UDP protocol
  is faster than the TCP protocol, this was a main reason in the desire to
  use UDP.
@@ -7439,16 +7443,16 @@ key "Slee2007"
  Using Thrift would mean the GGS would feature a standard protocol for network
  communication.
  Before finding out about Thrift during a lecture of Joe Armstrong (one
- of the inventors of Erlang), an implementation of the GGS protocol had
+ of the inventors of Erlang), the GGS protocol had already been implemented,
- already been implemented, moving to Thrift would mean too much efford for
+ moving to Thrift would have meant too much efford for a prototype during
- a prototype during the short amount of time.
+ the short amount of time.
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 The use of Google protocol buffers - which is a different approach to a
  standard protocol framework, implemented by Google - or other protocols
- can be supported quite easily by developing protocol modules for each the
+ can be supported quite easily by developing protocol modules for each of
- protocols.
+ the protocols.
  No protocol modules for these protocols have however been developed during
  the writing of this thesis.
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@@ -7465,8 +7469,8 @@ name "sec:Operating-system-limitations"
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-The operating systems on the computers which were used to run the bots when
+The operating systems on the computers which have been used to run the bots
- testing the GGS prototype had some limitations.
+ while testing the GGS prototype had some limitations.
  The operating systems used were Linux and Mac OS X, since these systems
  are quite similar on a lower level they exhibited the same limitations..
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