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- of availability
+ of availability 
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  downtime in a year.
  The level of instability and bad fault tolerance seen in the game server
- industry would not have been accepted in the telecoms industry.
+ industry would not have been accepted in the telecom industry.
  This level of instability should not be accepted in the game server industry
  either.
  An unavailable phone system could potentially have life threatening consequence
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 Moving back to the gaming industry.
- The main reason to develop reliable servers are monetary, it is important
+ The main reason to develop reliable servers is a higher revenue, do archive
- for game companies to expand its customer base.
+ this it is important for game companies to expand their customer base.
- Reliable game servers are one improvement that will create a good image
+ Reliable game servers will create a good image of the company.
- of a company.
  In general the downtime of game servers is much higher than the downtime
- of telecom system 
+ of telecom systems evenso the overall structure of the systems is similar
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+ in many ways.
-status open
+ It should be possible to learn and reuse solutions from the telecom systems
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+ to improve game servers.
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- The structure of the system is similar in many ways and it should be possible
- to reuse solutions from the telecom system to improve game servers.
  
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 In the current state game servers are developed on a per-game basis, often
  this seems like a bad solution.
- Developers of network game need to understand network programming.
+ Developers of multiplayer games need to understand network programming,
- A way to change this is a generic game server which gives the game developers
+ which above all be a problem for small companies and indipendent game developer
- a server which they implement their game towards.
+s who often lack expertise in that field.
+ A way to help them in the competition would be to offer a generic game
+ server which gives them a environment in which they can implement their
+ game in.
  This approach would not only make it easier to develop network games, it
  would also allow games in different programming languages to be implemented
  using the same server.
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-Some factors key to the development of GGS have been isolated.
+Some key factors to the development of the GGS have been isolated.
- Many of these come from the telecom sector.
+ Many of these are found in the telecom sector too.
  The factors are 
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 scalability, fault tolerance 
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-and being 
+and a 
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+ nature.
  These terms are defined below.
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